Macbeth
At the begging of this tragedy Macbeth is returning
from a victorious battle against the Norwegians. Macbeth is well respected by
the king and the people of Scotland. He is a loved person by his wife. On the
heath Macbeth encounters three witches and they tell him his future. They
explained that one day he will become king of Scotland. At this time Macbeth is
undecided to give in to this temptation.
His wife is an ambitious woman, she persuades Macbeth
to kill King Duncan. After killing Duncan Macbeth felt guilty and remorse. This
made him fell weak he couldn’t
Sleep eat but Macbeth convinced himself
Nice work!Its great of the use of your VCOP but you could improve on your spellings ;-)
ReplyDelete*Well done you have used a range of different vocabulary like temptation and ambition
ReplyDelete*You have used some new openers.
you could improve on more openers.
It is an excellent piece of work but you need to work on puntuation.
ReplyDelete*have you finished?
ReplyDelete*well done, good use of volcabulary (encounters)
*good use of vocabulary like encountered
ReplyDelete*also good discription
(wish) you need to write a bit more
well done gurinder you have used great vocabulary and description.
ReplyDeletewell done you have inclued vcop
ReplyDeleteYou have described Macbeth perfectly with detail and you also rembered key momments in the story.However,I think it sounds boring because you are using very simple sentences.
ReplyDeleteI think your work was okay your vocab was good but you should improve more on your sentences
ReplyDeleteGOOD WORK, You included good vocabulary such as ambitious. You have relevant features such the fact he couldn't sleep, eat and that he felt weak.
ReplyDeleteUse complex sentances.
I like the structure of your work.
ReplyDelete*correct use of vocabulary.
*I like your openers.
*You should be careful with your punchuation.
you need to look at puntuation but i like that you used feelings and emotions.
ReplyDeletegood work gurjinder
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