Tuesday 15th January 2013
Character Profile
At the beginning of this
tragedy, Macbeth was a loyal subject to the King and was the leader of the
army. He was brave and courageous as he fought against the Norwegians for his
King. His best friend, Banquo, was walking with him past the heath where they
met the witches. As he was told by the witches that he will be King and that he
was going to be Lord of Cawdor now, he sent a note to Lady Macbeth.
After killing the King,
Macbeth felt guilty about this tragic event he had committed. He was very
weak-minded as he was persuaded by Lady Macbeth to kill his cousin, King
Duncan. Lady Macbeth was very ambitious, but Macbeth, Lord of Cawdor was not.
He let his horrible wife lead him to murder.
Once Macbeth saw Banquo’s
ghost, his feelings were unpredictable. Not only did Lady Macbeth see Macbeth
glare at an empty chair, but the full table looked at him. Lady Macbeth said
that he was ill as an excuse and sent everybody home, but it was so he could
not give it away.
After seeing the woods move,
he got very nervous. He remembered the witches prophecy, “you will only be
defeated when the Birnam woods start moving towards Dunsinune Hill.
very good. you have used good openers.to make it better you could use more interesting verbs and adverbs
ReplyDeleteWell done you have used good descriptive vocabulary
ReplyDeleteUse of good punctuation
ReplyDeleteDrop in clauses and complex sentences
Next time try to add more detail
*a great use of volcabulary
ReplyDelete*good openers
Good work-
ReplyDelete-I like the fact you included quotes from
Macbethm,'you will only be defeated when the...
-You included vocabulary such as tragic etc.
-Give it more detail, You didn't speak about
Banquo getting murdered, only about his ghost.
Lavanan
*Well done jay you've used good VCOP.
ReplyDelete*You're work is well structured.
*You've rushed some of it.
-Its a gtreat peice of work you used lots of vocabuarly.
ReplyDelete-There were lots of of good opemers.
-You need to ad more information.